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"What'd you say honey?" he leaned closer. Stroking her face, her hair.
"Stay?" she asked softly wanting to hold to the security she felt in his arms in his presence. Connor slipped in bed behind her pulling her to close. Alexa curled into him falling into a deep dreamless sleep.
- COMMENTS
Margeaux1031almost 8 years agoThis is wonderful! There are so many layers to each character, I just love it. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what's next. You're very talented but I think that some things would have more clarity if you had a beta or someone to proofread and correct the spelling, grammar and syntax. Your story isn't wrought mistakes like some others but, there's always room for improvement.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoYour story is all over the place but you can fix it so do so
Anonymousover 8 years agoWow just wow, this was an incredible read but please don't leave us hanging! I feel like I've discovered an amazing treasure but it's incomplete... Update soon pretty please!!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoThis making a great study and build up just to not finish shit, needs to stop. It's irritating. If you wanted to become an author IRL, fans would be left hanging. Cold turkey like you got pregnant and stopped smoking. I know you have your lives but geeze...
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThis story is gold...a shame it won't be finished
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoOhNO, I thought this chapter would finish the story! I've fallen in love with Connor n Alexa! Please, please finish!!!!
black_maestraover 11 years agonot sure what happened to you, but when time permits pls finish this story. I am going to assume that not only are you a gifted story teller, but an avid reader. I am asking you to put yourself in your readers' place, we like what you have shown us of your skill and would like for you to finish this as well. Any story can be good, fun, interesting, thought provoking, but for it to be truly great, ya' gotta at least finish it. I say all of this to challenge you to finish this tale, seeing as how you wrote your chapt. 10 in 2010 (I think)... and others have since then asked you to finish it, and you haven't, so I hope you at least continue to read your comments from your fans to know we want it competed.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThis is a pretty good story so far, but I'm going to start inspecting the stories more closely to see if they're actually finished before I start reading them. It's understandable that "life happens" and sometimes writers just can't get back to the story for awhile, but it's a waste of time reading them unfinished. That's especially so if it's been a long while, because you just end up having to reread the story.
