As It Seems Ch. 10

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"What'd you say honey?" he leaned closer. Stroking her face, her hair.

"Stay?" she asked softly wanting to hold to the security she felt in his arms in his presence. Connor slipped in bed behind her pulling her to close. Alexa curled into him falling into a deep dreamless sleep.

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BlkGrlMagicBlkGrlMagicover 5 years ago

So.....major disappointment

Margeaux1031Margeaux1031over 7 years ago
Holy smokes!!

This is wonderful! There are so many layers to each character, I just love it. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what's next. You're very talented but I think that some things would have more clarity if you had a beta or someone to proofread and correct the spelling, grammar and syntax. Your story isn't wrought mistakes like some others but, there's always room for improvement.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
frickin awesome story...GET A PROOFREADER IMMEDIATELY

Your story is all over the place but you can fix it so do so

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing story!!!

Wow just wow, this was an incredible read but please don't leave us hanging! I feel like I've discovered an amazing treasure but it's incomplete... Update soon pretty please!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I'm thoroughly upset.

Freaking finish this story!!! It's too good not to.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
this is why I leave Literotica so much

This making a great study and build up just to not finish shit, needs to stop. It's irritating. If you wanted to become an author IRL, fans would be left hanging. Cold turkey like you got pregnant and stopped smoking. I know you have your lives but geeze...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I come back here every 6 months

This story is gold...a shame it won't be finished

sunfire52sunfire52over 10 years ago
Really

Is this the End.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
no

Please I need more, come back.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

This is just cruel.. really unfinished

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