All Comments on 'As Journey to Janet'

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sissyjolie4usissyjolie4ualmost 5 years ago

very nice, look forward to the next chapter!

Csucker64Csucker64almost 5 years ago
Mmmm

I was so horny reading this

justwarped2018justwarped2018almost 5 years ago

very hot, keep writing

300bowler300300bowler300almost 5 years ago
SO HOT

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO JANET NEXT...BETTY jo xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Description of fucking is poor

In too many ways it was vague even to the point that I wondered if he was actually fucked or merely had a finger or dildo inserted in his ass.

Also I counted 12 spelling errors (including the title) and some poor phrasing as well - too many defects for a quality story.

rtistrtistover 2 years ago

what a wonderful start to a story

got my imagination going

disregard the negative comments

you are doing a hell of a job getting me turned ON

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