by jamtby
In too many ways it was vague even to the point that I wondered if he was actually fucked or merely had a finger or dildo inserted in his ass.
Also I counted 12 spelling errors (including the title) and some poor phrasing as well - too many defects for a quality story.
what a wonderful start to a story
got my imagination going
disregard the negative comments
you are doing a hell of a job getting me turned ON