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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great story and keep writing your stories

there always a but.you just let jeff and joe slide,other than that the story was great.in real life its' ok to come down hard on people who betray and cheat on you.the more you let the wife off,the more she betrayed you.you should told the kids everything.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
As long as it takes ...

could be a very long time! No hope there.

Funny about the kids names - bet they grow up loving alphabet soup.

Well done as always. This story has a nice flowing style - great read.

Regards, DJ

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