by beat_andthepulse
Excellent new chapter. I like this one alot. I love how she's being integrated into the story. I can't help but like Sophie (and his mom)...maybe you'll tell her story next? Looking forward to the next chapter. You've done a good job of showing the couple to compliment each other. I wonder how it will be accepted to have a human turned were become alpha female. I'd like to see her ask Connor's mom that. I thought the story between grant and his mate was so sad. But it was a good warning about what can happen when you have a crazy woman who wants the alpha badly enough to bring her brother to town :) Keep writing!
I just read all 3 chapters and I am looking forward to a lot more hopefully. I love how Audra just accepts her fate with Connor. Please write more soon!
Uh-oh Connor better keep an eye on her!! I really enjoyed the update, and I like where the story is going. I can't wait for more. Please update again soon!
Things were going just to well for Audra and Connor. Enter the bad guys. I see Kirsten and Bo making a few waves. Going up against an Alpha is one thing but to go after a mate to someone who has waited so long, I could "almost" feel sorry for the bad guys.
I look forward to the coming chapters. Watching Audra continue to accept her future w/Connor and as an Alpha Bitch will be a joy. Yet at the same time watching her take on the enemy will be exhilarating. And watching Connor can only make me love the guy that much more!! So bring on the next chapter I'm ready for it. hehe-he
It is fun watching a jealous alpha around his soon-to-be mate. The story is going to get tenser now, but we can handle it.
Thanks for posting this entertaining chapter.
Please keep writing and updating. Can't wait to read more!
This is a good series so far. I love reading it. I kind of wish the chapters were longer but I know that can't always happen.
I can't wait for the next one!
Thanks for making your Audra a strong woman. It is good too see that from someone bearing my name and the name of other strong women
i think her grandmother may have had a feeling, and thus acted upon it, and my oh my, audra is going to be a hell of a werewolf , and i think bo and his sister are in for a rather painful and rude awaking
fabulous darlin'! get the next one out soon, i can't wait!!
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Checking back constantly for an update. I hope you are not walking away from this story!
Chapter 4 is with the editor.. With the holidays everything has been very busy, but I assure you, a new chapter will be up soon. :)
Saw the heading said 3 part series and if you finish there I think I might go a little insane... great build up. 1 of the best storylines I have seen in "non-human" in awhile. Unfortunatly, I am not a patient person... so editor PLEASE hurry up...
This is one of the best stories I've read on here, ever. Please give us the 4th chapter. Gracias.
I wonder if Bo would think twice about taking Audra if he knew that she was the mate of another alpha.
I've read a bunch of the non-human category, and have enjoyed this set more than most of them. So keep 'em coming, please!!! :)
How much longer do you expect me to wait??? I'm salivating here as i'm waiting to find out what's going on. MORE PLEASE! =^_^= PK
Please let us know if we should stop checking. I am no longer entertained with waiting and checking for months
really awesome story cant wait for more..............please update soon
You're off to a great start with this story...I hope you haven't given up on it and plan to update it again soon!!
Yet another good werewolf story that's been left unfinished. I do so hope you'll continue this story. Your characters are fun and your plot is developing nicely. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
Please please please finish the story. I'd hate for this to be yet another unfinished piece when it is so well written.
Great characters, totally believable romance, unique details with the great-aunt story--all part of a wonderful beginning. Bring on the rest! Let me know if you need more editing help.
I hit a major wall with this story and scrapped the last completed chapter.. I know it has been a long time since I've posted.. My apologies! I have had some inspiration, though.. So I will begin writing again.
Again, thank you for all the kind words. :)
Please please please write more it has been over a year since the last chapter please write another very very very soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice plot, neat cliffhanger ;).
When are you gonna continue?
July 2013
I love this story!
After Conner and Adura's story is complete I would really enjoy meeting the rest of the pack and finding out how other pack members find there mates........
Just some ideas that will hopefully help you finish the series ;-)
I know that it has been a few years, but I do hope that you take this story up again as I would LOVE to see how it all turns out!
Another great story left unfinished!!! Please please please keep writing !!!!