All Comments on 'As Luck Would Have It Ch. 03'

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canndcanndover 12 years ago

Excellent new chapter. I like this one alot. I love how she's being integrated into the story. I can't help but like Sophie (and his mom)...maybe you'll tell her story next? Looking forward to the next chapter. You've done a good job of showing the couple to compliment each other. I wonder how it will be accepted to have a human turned were become alpha female. I'd like to see her ask Connor's mom that. I thought the story between grant and his mate was so sad. But it was a good warning about what can happen when you have a crazy woman who wants the alpha badly enough to bring her brother to town :) Keep writing!

LadySilverNovaLadySilverNovaover 12 years ago
Thank You...

For adding another ch. It was well worth the wait.

PinkPantheressPinkPantheressover 12 years ago
Great stuff!

I just read all 3 chapters and I am looking forward to a lot more hopefully. I love how Audra just accepts her fate with Connor. Please write more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Loved it

Nice update to a wonderful story,

fefe428fefe428over 12 years ago
Intrigue!!

Uh-oh Connor better keep an eye on her!! I really enjoyed the update, and I like where the story is going. I can't wait for more. Please update again soon!

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
I Knew It

Things were going just to well for Audra and Connor. Enter the bad guys. I see Kirsten and Bo making a few waves. Going up against an Alpha is one thing but to go after a mate to someone who has waited so long, I could "almost" feel sorry for the bad guys.

I look forward to the coming chapters. Watching Audra continue to accept her future w/Connor and as an Alpha Bitch will be a joy. Yet at the same time watching her take on the enemy will be exhilarating. And watching Connor can only make me love the guy that much more!! So bring on the next chapter I'm ready for it. hehe-he

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
So dreamy and romantic, but now the drama steps in.

It is fun watching a jealous alpha around his soon-to-be mate. The story is going to get tenser now, but we can handle it.

Thanks for posting this entertaining chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love this story!

Please keep writing and updating. Can't wait to read more!

bronzebeauty34bronzebeauty34over 12 years ago
Love it!

I'm really enjoying your story keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good so far but..

This is a good series so far. I love reading it. I kind of wish the chapters were longer but I know that can't always happen.

I can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Thanks

Thanks for making your Audra a strong woman. It is good too see that from someone bearing my name and the name of other strong women

catman71catman71over 12 years ago
i do not think its luck

i think her grandmother may have had a feeling, and thus acted upon it, and my oh my, audra is going to be a hell of a werewolf , and i think bo and his sister are in for a rather painful and rude awaking

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
terrific chapter

terrific chapter i can not waot untill the next one

allimbaallimbaover 12 years ago
awesome!

Great chapter!!

kitteh_katkitteh_katover 12 years ago
Gr8 chapter!

fabulous darlin'! get the next one out soon, i can't wait!!

k_k

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

I enjoyed reading this story immensely. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please!

Checking back constantly for an update. I hope you are not walking away from this story!

beat_andthepulsebeat_andthepulseover 12 years agoAuthor
I'm not walking away

Chapter 4 is with the editor.. With the holidays everything has been very busy, but I assure you, a new chapter will be up soon. :)

defiantbutterflydefiantbutterflyover 12 years ago
a little worried...

Saw the heading said 3 part series and if you finish there I think I might go a little insane... great build up. 1 of the best storylines I have seen in "non-human" in awhile. Unfortunatly, I am not a patient person... so editor PLEASE hurry up...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
WOW!!!

This is one of the best stories I've read on here, ever. Please give us the 4th chapter. Gracias.

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 12 years ago
Great story

I wonder if Bo would think twice about taking Audra if he knew that she was the mate of another alpha.

RoserioRoserioabout 12 years ago
Hopping From Foot to Foot

I've read a bunch of the non-human category, and have enjoyed this set more than most of them. So keep 'em coming, please!!! :)

ladybug71ladybug71about 12 years ago
Excellent.....

More PLEASE!!!!!

PaganKittyPaganKittyabout 12 years ago
OH COME ON!

How much longer do you expect me to wait??? I'm salivating here as i'm waiting to find out what's going on. MORE PLEASE! =^_^= PK

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Please tell me there's more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please

Please let us know if we should stop checking. I am no longer entertained with waiting and checking for months

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

okay, i want SO much more.

Now!!!

;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
more please

really awesome story cant wait for more..............please update soon

fefe428fefe428almost 12 years ago
hoping for an update....

You're off to a great start with this story...I hope you haven't given up on it and plan to update it again soon!!

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOalmost 12 years ago
Slow

build to a steady burn. More editing needed, still a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
*sigh*

Yet another good werewolf story that's been left unfinished. I do so hope you'll continue this story. Your characters are fun and your plot is developing nicely. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More

Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please please please finish the story. I'd hate for this to be yet another unfinished piece when it is so well written.

TiyeTiyeover 11 years ago
Hmmm

So far so good. Please continue.

vivavixenvivavixenover 11 years ago

Great characters, totally believable romance, unique details with the great-aunt story--all part of a wonderful beginning. Bring on the rest! Let me know if you need more editing help.

beat_andthepulsebeat_andthepulseover 11 years agoAuthor
Appreciate all the feedback!

I hit a major wall with this story and scrapped the last completed chapter.. I know it has been a long time since I've posted.. My apologies! I have had some inspiration, though.. So I will begin writing again.

Again, thank you for all the kind words. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I would think he would notice kirstens though or at least the similarity

darkravenwolfdarkravenwolfabout 11 years ago

More please. Story is great so far

jazz13jazz13about 11 years ago
More!!!

Hope to see your next chapter soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Please please please write more it has been over a year since the last chapter please write another very very very soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
pls continue the story

Nice plot, neat cliffhanger ;).

When are you gonna continue?

July 2013

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Come on it was getting juicy

tuty0201tuty0201about 10 years ago

Oh come on finish the story please!

werewolfsmatewerewolfsmatealmost 10 years ago
Please continue!!!!!!

I love this story!

After Conner and Adura's story is complete I would really enjoy meeting the rest of the pack and finding out how other pack members find there mates........

Just some ideas that will hopefully help you finish the series ;-)

agamottoagamottoabout 9 years ago
Great story,

I know that it has been a few years, but I do hope that you take this story up again as I would LOVE to see how it all turns out!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Noooooooooooo!

Another great story left unfinished!!! Please please please keep writing !!!!

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