All Comments on 'As Timeless as the Sea'

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now12 months ago

A beautiful love story. I'd love to hear how they ended up...

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Predictable second chapter but very well written and enjoyable. 5 Stars. You can leave it there and we can guess it does eventually end or maybe it doesn't and Abby is up for a second round of motherhood.

tennesseeredtennesseered12 months ago

Well done. An artful telling of a story without the usual angst and anger. 5*.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

out standing...please next chapter

sanutdsanutd12 months ago

Yes do continue if you have not already have it’s an inspiring story for all

trigudistrigudis12 months agoAuthor

Thanks all for reading and commenting. I hadn't planned on a sequel but the requests for one gives me pause. It would have to make for what I consider compelling reading and not just more romps in the sack. We'll see.

oldsage_1oldsage_112 months ago

Great love story well written and a satisfactory ending. If you decide to continue consider that May December couples do happen and some do "Live happily ever after". Yes they will part someday but maybe 40 years from now instead of near term. Kids? Probably not. I tell my Son (father of 4) "Parenthood is highly over rated!" Dealing with 4 teenagers he *sometimes* agrees! Could be room for an adoption thread in there.

You are the author. If this couple has more to share I am sure we will enjoy. If not, It was a pleasure and we will catch you at the next rodeo!

Cheers

SAGE

5

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy11 months ago

Great follow up!

5

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