All Comments on 'As You Wish, Master'

Welcome new author. Very good story. Clean, fast and hot. You gave a good feel for them. I liked the care between them.

- with the addition of my thanks! Please write much more for us.

It was aimed at being a strong BDSM session and ended up being almost too light and sounded like a commercial for cookware. The parts were there but they were not strong enough, there wasn't enough deep emotion or physical sensation. He didn't even spank her or make her excited. It just needed a bit more strength.