by ajadventures
True story? What pitiful existence is the cuckold, disregard (if You could ever overcame that) every alarm your brain sends you for safety... Wow.
Well written at least, continue with this without me, have a good day and weekend.
Didn’t read chapter one. Skimmed chapter two. Nothing to to root for in any of the characters
Get help your brain is leaking out of your ears. WRONG FUCKING CATEGORY DUMB ASS. PUT THIS BULLSHIT IN THE BDSM CATEGORY.
Too stupid to know the difference between 'decent' and 'descent' or that they have wildly different meanings. Maybe being a cuck is just of one of the more obvious signs of brain damage and this author can't do any better.
Thanks for proving the need for negative ratings or psychological analysis of the writer.
This is so poorly written that it should qualify for Satire/Humor category. Stop writing, OP, you're be-clowning yourself.
Ditto the previous remarks re the authors grasp of the language he professes to write in. It IS spelt descent and just for the hell of it --- it ain't a decent story.
There has to be a chapter Joe beats the shit out of Paul. Or brings a gun. Or something. This dude needs to be destroyed