All Comments on 'Ashley Ch. 04'

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thedude2434thedude2434over 3 years ago
Good story

I'm surprised no one has commented, so I'll say that this story is really interesting so far! The build-up to the hot stuff is really good and mind control/possession via slime is not something we get on here enough!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love the way this is building

This is very interesting, unlike anything else I've read here. I like the way you're keeping it at a slow build but still highly sexually charged. You're also very slow to give up the game, which is quite enjoyable.

GingerpiciGingerpiciover 3 years ago
Double dittos

The best

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