All Comments on 'Ashley, The Demure Coworker Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Written as if...

...all men can only think of their female co-workers as sex objects! The sad but true fact is although we may think about such things from time to time, the motivation to accomplish work, earn a pay check and continue having a place to sleep that is "not work" and something to eat is EQUALLY as important.

WatchMeLadiesWatchMeLadiesalmost 15 years agoAuthor
Reply to "04/24/09 by Anonymous in USA" comment

Point well taken. However, if I had chosen to write erotica about a man NOT having any desires for his coworker, then there wouldn't be much erotica in it, would there? Of course, I could have chosen an entirely different subject, but one of the main goals was to dig into the psyche of a seemingly happily married man and his sexual pulsions for a woman who apparently has nothing over his wife.

Sorry if my writing couldn't convey those goals better. I'm just a beginner, hopefully I'll get better with time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
more, please

Great story! But where is chapter 2? I would love to read a part 2 where we find out what Ashley is thinking...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
please write more im so wet.

I cant believe im just now finding this. Your writing my deepest fantasy. I cant cum without thinking of my husband fucking another woman. And his coworker is one I masturbate to daily. I mean every morning he leaves for work I finger myself till I soak the sheets just thinking he might be cheating on me with someone from work. It is crazy because his name is John and mine is Lynn! A fantasy I have never shared with him and have kept secret these past 6 years please write more. PLEASE!

LMPKLMPKover 9 years ago

I cant believe im just now finding this. Your writing my deepest fantasy. I cant cum without thinking of my husband fucking another woman. And his coworker is one I masturbate to daily. I mean every morning he leaves for work I finger myself till I soak the sheets just thinking he might be cheating on me with someone from work. It is crazy because his name is John and mine is Lynn! A fantasy I have never shared with him and have kept secret these past 6 years please write more. PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
For previous poster---

Look at "The Big Sleep"-- section with "the bookseller babe." On YouTube.

You'll Love It!!

Oh. It's famous. Be this girl-woman! Read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You know this is adorable.

No one needs to tell you.

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