All Comments on 'Ashley's Becoming of Age'

True story, about a straight A student that doesn't know how to spell. The story was mildly erotic, that's about the best I can give it.

I really enjoyed this! Please tell us more! Keep writing!

Improper language rendered this unreadable past the first few paragraphs. I have a healthy respect for writing in all its forms, and this type of dreck denegrates the work of so many other fine contributors by making literotica look like a come-as-you-are slumber party.

I believe the word is 'nipples.' Barely worthy of reading.

Spelling and grammar were far from perfect, but the story certainly wasn’t unreadable. Some of the description was a little forced rather than erotic, but on the whole the story had a good premise and was mildly entertaining. Little bit of a slow starter for a short story, but wide open for a series of sequels.

i couldn't get past the first paragraph with three references to 'nibbles' instead of nipples. while nipples are fun to nibble on, obvious mispelled words this soon in the story are too distracting for me to continue to try to read it

Really, it's not that bad as almost everybody seems to think. I for one like it and am looking forwards to more

if you spelt the right words i wud of enjoyed it sorry