All Comments on 'Ashley's Birthday Party'

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JustcuriousguyJustcuriousguyabout 4 years ago
great

It was hot a real turn on

Sucker4BoobiesSucker4Boobiesabout 4 years ago
Meh

Not half bad, but not half good either.

Countrylad77Countrylad77about 4 years ago
Don't listen to the haters

While not really my thing the story was kinda hot. If it's what you're into keep going with it. If the same story included real males the haters would be loving it. You do you, don't stop writing because a few arseholes didn't like it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
"It needs to be noted that this story contains futanari so readers aren't surprised."

If you really were so concerned that people aren't surprised by this, adding "futanari" to the synopsis would have been a better place, ya know, before the opened the story.

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Putting a warning about "this story contains content you might not like" in the story -- regardless of the material -- is like having a with "Do Not Enter" sign that can only be read after you've entered the room.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
If you dont like it dont read

Futanari and supernatural are in in the tags. Futanari is 10 words in. If its not your thing click off dumbfucks lol

This was a good futa incest story. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
more please!

Please please please write more!!!

FutaLover_79FutaLover_79about 4 years ago
Good start

Decent enough story, but it was too short and lacked detail. I don't even think you described the characters and what they looked like. I'm a big fan of futa incest, but there just wasn't much here to be excited about. I still look forward to what you come up with next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Futa gang bang

You need to write a story where the youngest girl gets gang banged by all her futa relatives and only after that does she develop the ability to grow a girl cock

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
OH PLEASE

Save us all DON'T write more

ToughSailorToughSailor8 months ago

Oh, for Christ's sake. Put your pencil down and stick to simply reading the stories instead of trying to write them . . .

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