All Comments on 'Ashley's Boyfriend Makes a Bet'

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DesireeFoxDesireeFoxover 10 years ago
One would hope

Ashley would be smart enough to stay with a Master.

DAMSEL on top Approved

thebuffalothebuffaloover 10 years ago

A well told story. If someone was looking to find fault they couldn't find it here.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Goat Roper

Yeah, the 'tradesman' remark was unfortunate. Just call him a 'loser' or a 'goat roper!' Actually, the observation that the Hero had always seen the Asshole stoned is quite sufficient. It was a nicely done piece. A bit long in areas which could have been shorter (and vice versa!) But all in all, nicely done!

5*

robroy93robroy93almost 4 years ago
Heads

Heads I'm a cuck, tails I'm still a cuck and she's still a whore.

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