All Comments on 'Ashley's Homecoming Ch. 03'

Will Lori's sister join in the fun?

Good work buddy

I'm a writer of nonfiction but love to read other writers work. Most writers try to make their stories way to hard to even try to believe. Your story is fun, and makes your readers want this story to work out for "daddy". I too hope in your next few chapters you bring in the sister, and yes that was the whole idea of bringing her up I'm sure.

No bounce No Play!