All Comments on 'Ashley's Last Pizza Delivery'

Truly terrible.

Really bad. Ridiculous plot and poor writing.

Good story. Needs a final part to say what ever happen to Ashley. Did she ever get pregnant. Or did the other members of the football team have sex with her did she ever get a new job? If so what kind did she get. Or did she drop out of school and become a teen hooker

I really enjoyed it. Good job! Would love to find her in a alley full of old hobos :p

Keep it up and thanks.

Love it, hope we see more of Ashley. Any chance Ashley and her sister are out one night (with Officer Buck's daughter) and need Officer Buck or his son to 'help' them?

Don’t listen to the haters. This is an instant classic. Loved it. 5 stars.

The whole Ashley pizza saga has been excellent. Great writing and detail, I liked Bernard’s thought-out plan to triple penetrate her. The characters and world are an interesting balance; men can simply decide to fuck Ashley at will, but she is so eager to oblige and enthusiastic in her enjoyment that it’s no big deal. I also liked how all three parts of the story were just one day on the job.