All Comments on 'Ashley's Revenge Ch. 07'

pls don't make the wife a cheater. that's way too typical and such a cop out justification for what he's doing. i almost rather he assume she's cheating or ashley fake the evidence that his wife is cheating than to have use manipulated into thinking his actions are okay.

I love the way the story is unfolding and thought the wife was such a bitch anyway. I don't think he would be in a relationship with Ashley if the wife wasn't a bitch. Another 5* addition to your collection TMM.. Thanks..

You have me on the edge of my seat ! Great chapter looking forward to the next

Maybe it could be an amicable split since they both have needs that aren't being met at home? I like that actually.

Ashley is definitely wanting him on a permanent basis but how will her parents react if they come out? Should make for an interesting twist.

I don't think the wife would be into a threesome.LOL She seems far too straightlaced to even contemplate that and I hope that if they do bring in Lindsay, that it is obvious who he would prefer and who is number one to him.

I think Ashley is deeper than you are letting us see at this point and the little insights we get to her give us a more three dimensional character than a just a hot cheerleader.

I can't want to read the whole series!

If the wife is cheating, then his and Ashley's encounters almost become justified, and that really waters down the intensity and mental stimulation of the entire situation. The thing that made the affair so kinky was that Ashley was a determined seductress and the wife really wasn't a bad person. The best part of this story is the wrongness of it all.

Every time Ashley refers to the wife as "bitch" it's more wicked because we know the wife really isn't a bitch at all. If these pearls weren't of value to the wife, then it would be just another prop during sex. If the wife is really cheating, then the wife becomes a villain of sorts and all the naughty encounters become okay, just another typical fuck story. Please don't let this happen.

Thanks to everyone for the comments.

For the couple of readers that have mentioned the wife cheating all I can say is that the only evidence that would seem to exist was found by Ashley, who seems a bit hellbent on revenge. Maybe she is cheating, maybe she's not. That's what we need to find out as we go along!

Thanks for reading!

Great series, I hope there are many more chapters to come.

Fucking lava hot!!! Go Ashley! Love that little brilliant slut and how layered she is! Not your little average teen Lolita!

Please continue. Dialog is intelligent. Description of the sex is great. Every middle-age man's fantasy. It's possible Ashley planted the ticket stub. Can't wait to find out who dunnit to whom.

I loved this tale. Good, descriptive writing, very erotic and evocative. The scenario is unbelievably hot! I wish I was this dude :-) I can't wait to read more and find out what happens...

On one hand, I don't like cheaters, of either sex, so this aspect of this series does not turn me on...however, we(and hubbie) now suspect that it's not all one sided, is it?

If it is the case, will he confront his wife, or sit down for an honest talk? would they "open" their marriage? Maybe a threesome with all the protagonists? Will someone get bitten on the ass?

On the other hand, the teen's revenge/seduction is an interesting twist by itself and makes me wonder where all this is going and how it will end...

Oy! All these questions!

she comes by it naturally. born out of her own behaviour.

Then just as quick the moments gone. Just when I thought Brian was in the clear, you've thrown another obstical in his path. I'm thinking Ashley is one clever woman, Brian should be very careful not to leave her hanging. I feel like I'm on a thrill ride with this story.

Absolutely loved the way you have imagined this. I was not excited about the pearls initially, but the way you used it , degrading one of wife's treasured possessions was absolutely amazing. Similar to your idea about degrading her side of bed and using the panties making her suck Ashley's pussy juice in earlier chapter. Just awesome.

Always love when the older stories get comments. This whole series was a lot of fun to write. Ashley is a whole lot of danger wrapped up in such a nice package!

I only a couple of days ago stumbled across your work, I'm glad I finally did. Ashley is a walking wet dream, similar in ways to my neighbor. I've been married 23 years and the sweet young bride down the road will be 23 next month. 5'3", 105#, strawberry blond, hazel eyes, pale skin, c-cups. Actually looks like a much younger version of my wife. And hugs me every time I see her. She stars in almost all of my fantasies.

The ONLY thing that I don't enjoy about this story is the repeated 'Daddy Play', a lot of people enjoy that but I never have. I have no problem with incest stories (absolutely love some of them), just don't like the ones involving parents, especially fathers. Even don't particularly like the use of "Mommy or Daddy" in the sex talk when no relation.

Other than that, this is one HOT story and I plan to read the rest of it. Then I'll check out your other stories most likely.

Thanks for the read.

Can't read any further. Had this happened AFTER he found out his wife was cheating, it could have been good. The fact that is cheating well BEFORE knowing it, makes him a shit to start with!

Fucking hot!

Very hot tantalizing day