All Comments on 'Ashmodaen Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can't wait to read more, especially when it gets to the sexy bits!

LamppLamppover 2 years ago

Loving it so far, looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great start! Please, continue your good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Imaginative, fun, well written and just a damn fine start. This looks to be a favorite quickly.

J.D.

abiostudent3abiostudent3over 2 years ago

Hell, the start of another good story, but what good is a new one if they all get abandoned and have no updates? I love your writing, I just want way, way more of it.

TwilitDesiresTwilitDesiresover 2 years agoAuthor

@abiostudnet 3

Of all my published work, Spider's Web is the only one that might end up abandoned as I have no idea where I'm going with it. All the rest have some sort of future plot idea moving forward. I just bounce around a lot, unfortunately, so it sometimes takes me a bit to get back around to existing stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hope this story continues!

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