All Comments on 'Ashworth Saga Ch. 01'

Good start. Seems like there's much more to go, so let's get Chap. 2 going, ok?

I like all these characters, and can't wait to see what else they do to each other. I'm not a big fan of long stories usually, but this on is good for many more chapters. Daddy has to fuck Michelle, and I want to hear more about Mrs. Samms' mamms!

He's hype smart and has a little dick too.

Nice story. Short and to the point. However, like I'm sure you will get from others here on Lit, tou might try to proof read your offerings or get an editor. A few grammatical errors and a few misspellings, but overall a decent story. Can't wait to read the next one.