All Comments on 'Asia'

snuff ending. Candy is kinda dumb, but she is lucky to be alive. what if Marc had chosen to keep the new girl?

You write well but I think your story is lacking. What was the motivation for the story? It wasn't all that erotic...the characters you allowed us to care about were abused and suffered with no rewards...why should I read your next story. I realize that life does not always have a happy ending, but this is fiction and if you are going to have this kind of tragic ending there should at least be some kind of moral to the story.

Great story!

It was kinda depressing in the end but nevertheless it was unique and stood out from all the other stories you find in literotica.

Once again, great story!

Not a feel good end

That was horrible. I thought the writing was poor, but the story was horrendous.