All Comments on 'Asian Innocence Manipulated Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Masterfully written!!!

The slow build up seduction of Selina is deliciously wonderful. I hope you make the seduction process as long and gradual as possible. Selina is a navie virgin and I really hope to see her surrender to sex to be as inevitable and realistic as possible. Lastly, I hope you make her final lovemaking to be her own willingness and as graphic,detail and long as possible because that I think is the climax of this wonderful story. I asked much because this is such a masterful story and I really love this story you have written.

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