All Comments on 'Asian Innocence Manipulated Ch. 04'

.....there's no need to spend half of page 1 giving a resumé of everything that's already happened. If people haven't read the earlier chapters then they need to go and do so.

Rapier

i like your exotic Setting and also the fact that she is so sweet yet so pure and un corrupted. 5 stars-

please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter...

i can't wait