All Comments on 'Asian MILF Fulfills My Fuck Fantasy'

Very hot! Please continue.

Pretty average story.

Liking it so far…..

Loved it. Hope there's more coming soon. 🤞

Love hot maturewomen. Those youngsters under 40 are okay but don’t quite make the grade

Good premise.

But seriously rushed.

Needed to slow down. Needed slow baring of her body. Needed much more in the way of foreplay/teasing before rushing ahead into pussy eating and blowjob.

Three stars.

Good for first story. Paragraphs need to be broken up and a smoother flow will help immensely. Recommend you get an editor. Three stars.

Great story please write the next part soon !

awesome cant wait for part 2

Pretty sure the word "MILF" doesn't need to appear every single time you mention her. Then there's the whole GEE ALL CAPS IS MORE EXCITING thing. If you want to make it read like an 8th grader wrote this, you're doing great, otherwise, learn to write like an adult.

I enjoyed the story except for the part about being happily married. As a happily married man for over 40 years myself I can't help but think this would be a violation of said "happiness". I would haver preferred he be a widower or single. Still, setting that aside, it was pretty hot.

Fuckin hot!

Good erotic text. No story line…like…one those Flash Gordon 15-30 minute serials that never ends on every Saturday morning in a local movie theater. .

Bloody brilliant for a first story, had to give it a 5* for the story line and the detail you managed to get across, I stress managed to get across. However other anonymous comments do need to be taken into account: yes it did feel rushed but that may just be the pent up energy and urgency pouring out. Yes the paragraph structure is all over the place and to a lesser extent grammar and punctuation. I know it's very difficult to find one but try getting an editor . I've finished reading and thinking back it feels like you have said: "I'm 50 she's black and 60, she fluttered her eyes, trashed her husband, she wore a black dress, I wore a bath robe, we fucked. Oh I'm white. I don't know if you have tried to write a wham bang thank you mam (which nearly works) or the beginning of a love story. There is more in this story but I suggest you leave it there and start a different story as this one will always be playing catch-up. I have deliberately written this to give you a feeling of how yours flows.

Seriously? "she's tall, slender, nice B-cup size tits with nipples that poke through whatever top she wears. She's got a tight little ass and long legs . . "

Filipinas are not tall - avg height just over 5'

I have to agree with Harvey_32.

5*

Hope to heck you give your readers more parts to this story. Very enjoyable.

Nice story!

Yes a very realistic account of two married opposites eventually hooking up. I would have liked far more information on how the two other halves reacted to this infidelity. So I hope that is shared with us in the next story.

this happened to me once with one of my wifes friends and eventually my wife got involved and everything turned out great and they were both asian

Wow I'm in a speechless hypnotic tranz,bra'vo'!!!

Fricking "B" tits, NOTHING BETTER!!!!

Looking forward to reading more about their adventures. Very good start!

thanks for the shaved warning tag. Saved me a bit of wasted time.

I would love to read a sequel. Maybe meeting her younger cousin, and their girlfriends? Nothing like fucking your way through a crowd of Asian chicklets!