by thinkpub
Love this story primarily because it reflects my ultimate experience - I would just LOVE to be dominated like this - a beautiful Asian would be a bonus but not a necessity. Just cannot find anyone in NZ to offer such an experience.
Yes please - next chapter ASAP
So much of this story reflected my own life, except for a Lovely Domme picking me up and taking me back with her. What a lucky guy. I wish it was me in his place. PLEASE continue this story. There is SO much more to tell. You can't leave us hanging. Thank you for your AWESOME story.
I'm not particularly inclined to submissiveness, but this was excellent. Hope to read about the second Saturday soon
My only complaint is your long paragraphs. Break those up, especially when you are transitioning from one pov to another.
Changing case from Tony to tony, from I to i was inspired.
The very idea of serving in such a way blows my mind... and creates a whole new world in my fantasies. Thank you.
J
Great Start, I hope you will please continue this storyline, because she sounds like an amazing and real asian goddess. I know these types of girls, but it seems they rely on their man or are too overly career oriented to consider BDSM lifestyle as a vocation. These women exist, and you're providing us with a glimpse at her goddess life that men want to be a part at her glorious perfect feet!
You really are a prolific writer. 4 stories in 14 years and 2 years now since the last one. That may explain why there has never been the promised sequel to this brilliant story. A great pity. Sorry for the sarcasm but it shows my disappointment.
Nice story. She's firm but responsible, and he is in no danger. Just the type of bdsm I like.
Where is the sequel, would enjoy the football saturday and see what she has in store for Tony.
Thank you for sharing this story with us. I very much enjoyed it and hope for a sequel or even a chapter 2, with it’s possibilities of going farther.