All Comments on 'Ask Alice'

What the heck was that ending about? Very weak. Would have been better served with a description of who got to fuck her.

It's Alice dude ... you know ... through the looking glass?

You should have someone proof read your work. To have so many misspelled simple words makes it seem like you didn't study very hard in school.F82B

I did have someone proofread ... but we went to the same school.

Very nice. I like stories where someone has to be convinced before they'll do something that is unthinkable for them on one level. Here you have managed to have Alice realistically convince herself to go all the way. I like it.