by LostSoulz
Top marks on this one. You're off to a really good start with this story...don't stop now.
I don’t normally comment on stories, but it’s so nice when you write a story. I look forward to it always! Seeing bra sizes that are insanely huge is amazing not just saying “the size of watermelons”. Thank you and keep up the great work!
Thank you all! Working on part 2 as we speak. Appreciate your kind comments and thanks for taking the time to write them.
I, too, look forward to the next chapter (or anything you post). Hope there's some breast growth in the future and/or other women to rival the O-cuppers!
I noted in a past comment that I would like a scenario where the mom isn't the biggest. It would add some variety/suspense to the mix and it would be nice to have a daughter outgrowing a massively endowed parent.
These are awesome!!! Finally, a writer who doesn’t say that a chick with gigantic tits wears a DD cup. Take notes from this author, people.
Use apostrophes for possessives. For example, sister's tits, not sisters tits.
Not a fan of huge, or big, tits. My favorite size is a B cup, with aC cup max.
Read part of your story, until I got completely turned off by the monster size tits.
I've only quickly skimmed your stories. Same old same old. Too many big tits, too many exclamation points!!! Reminds me of a Seinfeld episode, and not in a good way.