All Comments on 'Assassin Ch. 11'

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It's been a long wait between chapters, and it pleases me no end to say that this one didn't disappoint. The sex was hot, the betrayal was devastating, the humiliation was effective. And yet, I can't help but feel that Megan is exactly where she wants to be. I look forward to the next chapter.

There is one negative note, however. Misspellings and typos were prevalent throughout the chapter. Tighter editing would help.

incredible...

Never saw that one coming. Well, it would have been embarrassing riding into the sunset with a man called 'pork ribs'. Wait a minute - didn't she save his arse before the current incident?

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