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Anonymousabout 1 month agoAlright up till the very end. You wrote your main character heartless, any empathy gain was lost. Good writing spoiled
Anonymousabout 1 month agoFantastic, and especially the conclusion when she realizes how unnecessary her badgering little husband is.
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