All Comments on 'Astor Bacheret's Carnival of Dread'

I read the warning to readers and still decided to proceed with caution. I'm glad that I did!! Another wonderous entry into the Devinter canon!!

Enjoyable story. Liked the two MCs. Love goth girls. 5/5

That was amazing! I honestly didn't want the story to end! I love that Amaya got her Birdie in the end. I know you said you're going to write more about the golden chalice and not these two characters... But if you did, that would be amazing & I'm sure we'd all love to read more!

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I am glad to hear that the characters were appreciated. Who doesn't love a cute goth girl, hmm? @Aquariusgirl - Raven and Amaya wouldn't be the main characters but they would still be part of the storyline. I actually have four chapters completed already but it's a bit of a slow-burn now so I think they'll need a fair amount of editing to spice them up a little bit. Most readers don't want to go through 30,000 words before the first sex scene!

Great story! Shy girl, hot girl, creepy carnies and a lust demon - what's not to love? Not only that, you took these basic ingredients and created a vivid atmosphere and let the tension build until right where it needed to be before the climax.

great well written story