All Comments on 'Astrid in Love Ch. 07'

by FreeTheDancingLlamas

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

So good! Can’t wait for more!!

Anonymousover 4 years ago

This story IS BRILLIANT

I love this so much. Please continue. I hope Astrid does have Caius’s pups! I know it’s dangerous, but they can leave Oz right?

xena_warrior_sex_goddess over 4 years ago

This story was not what I expected at all. I'm very impressed with how your grammar and dialogue writing has improved over the course of this story! Please keeping writing it! I can't wait to read more and find out what happens between Astrid and Caius!!

blissfuldreams over 4 years ago

I swear you have incredible talent!! I'm so impressed and super rooting for your next chapter! Please put it up on Amazon so I can have this in my Kindle :) Thank you for writing!

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I love writing 30/12/22 - Back in business After some time away, I'm back and firing away at some of my stories: Trouble Maker (COMPLETED) - Its been taken off the site and put up on Amazon Kindle if you're interested. It's titled, "The Troublemaker", you can find it here:...

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