All Comments on 'At a Resort Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
ALL TURKS ARE CUNTS

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I TAKE OFFENCE AT THAT

Its you bastards that are cunts ABDULLAH IN ANKARA

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

More please!!!!!!!! Ignore the flamethrowers. They're idiots and ignorant assholes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
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Not sure just who your target audience is other than men in prison or sexual predators. Any other demographic would find it seriously lacking. You have a desperate need for an editor, the wording is very awkward. You make the statement "It's so dangerous to get an abortion before giving a birth to a first child". Might want to do a few minutes of research. This is totally false.

SluttieSammieSluttieSammieover 16 years ago
Loved it!!

More please x

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Rubbish

learn to write, the idea is good, the delivery shows you aren't a native english writer

de_grde_grover 12 years ago
Turkey is not a arab country.

You are referring to turkey and Turkish people as Arabs but as far as I know they are not Arabs.

Some of them are Muslim and there are probably arab migrants in turkey but that doesn't make it an Arab country.

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