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wamba_gurthwamba_gurth10 months ago

There is a kernel of a good story here, but the stilted dialog and descriptive sentence fragments made it difficult to read. I encourage you to continue writing, and would strongly suggest finding someone to act as a proof-reader. Don't give up -- you just need more practice.

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I write stories for entertainment. I do my best to dot my 'i's and cross my 't's, but I gave my grammar guide before I retired, so cut me some slack. At 74 there isn't a lot that I use to cherish doing that I am now capable of doing owing to a bad back. So to all of you fru...