All Comments on 'At My Wife's Suggestion Ch. 01'

more please , its hot

I loved the story. It’s 🥵. I would give 25 stars but 5 is the max allowed. Keep writing. Love it. Wish my daughter and wife were like Abby and her mom. Keep writing sweetie. Loved your story. 💕😘

Pregnancy for the daughter

Delusional chronic masterbaters writing more carp

Good incest story

Please continue

Great story! Hoping that the daughter is fertile and not protected. Let’s hear about her getting pregnant. And perhaps mom too. She can’t let daughter have all the fun. Plus it would be a great bonding experience for them…

It would have been natural and erotic to hear a convesation about birth control between parents and daugher.

If you don't have the energy to proofread your garbage before hitting the submit button, only idiots will enjoy reading it.

What an amazing story! Your storyline was perfect. Beginning with the wife’s voyeuristic enjoyment and rather than keep it secret sh invites her husband to participate…HOT! Highly erotic bringing out in the open that which so many keep hidden.

Thank You!

Dad442

Very hot and very well written, thanks! 5/5

fucking great story him will be busy from now on

Have you ever met another human? Do you know what a girl is? I’m guessing you’ve never had a mum right? People don’t talk out loud like that when masturbating. Mum’s never tell their husbands to fuck their kids.

loved it

Great story. Hope you continue this as a series. 😈

You might consider looking for a proofreader / editor to assist with spelling. 👍

Very good every mans dream good story and good writing.

The underlying story is hot, but this really needs editing. Keep it up, and just proofread next time.

OMG !

That is a damn hot story.

I used to think about my daughter and her mother having sex while I watched thru a slightly open door.

It never happened but I sure thought about it plenty.

Author, you need to slowly proofread your work, there are a few missing words.

Otherwise this is a great writing.

I suspect a second chapter would be a great read as well.

A few editing problems but otherwise a good story.

That was hot! Looking forward to chapter 2

Okay! Great first edition. A little bit of cleanup in the spell checking but a very good addition to the genre. I like the desire from all three members. I feel the desire and love in the story.

Please, please continue this story....

Nine inches, really? Nope

Get a proofreader. Bad spelling. Bad grammar. Missing apostrophes in possessive nouns. Just a mess.

You’ve got to continue this!