All Comments on 'At the Cabin Pt. 04'

I liked the story, but the whole 25 yr old stuff... really? Also this story should have been just 1 post. It's OK i guess. I only comment and vote at the end of the story.

Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Read all four chapters before I voted my 5. Although at times the pace seemed a little fast, all the elements were there for a good erotic story.

Loved the 4 part story. Write some more!!!!

Good story. A bit soft on yhe sex, but we'll done.

D&A

A most excellent read...would like to hear more about the family dynamic...

Five Star rating for the whole thing...I appreciate the family ties and how they blend together so well...like Just A and JJ told them, sex is more than just physical...the emotional tie has to be present, at some level, or it is not worth the effort. I have been with a few girls who, it turned out, would not/did not bond like I did...and I am a GUY...OOOHHH...guys are not supposed to be emotional and attached...

Sorry, guys...had to throw that out there...JJ and Liars got it right...

One thing I like about this story is the fact that not once was race or even skin tone/hair color mentioned. Sure, the names are pretty typical of “white” folk, but this family could be just about anything.

Excellent tale.

You should do part 5 where they all move in together.

Rapier