All Comments on 'At the End of the Temple'

Beautifully done ! I loved it!

My favorite things about your style is the language you use (it's lovely!) and the subtlety with which you write the dominance of women in their society. I love that you use the little things like the height of the entryway compared to that of a woman and even Asmaa and Mitra ogling Srinandi's body, something that is commonly only seen as acceptable when men are doing it to women. I also liked how Srinandi wasn't completely submissive and servile toward Asmaa and Mitra, but the way their genders worked in society in relation to each other was clearly defined. Overall it was a great read!