All Comments on 'At the Party Pt. 02'

I like where this is headed! Please continue!

beautiful build up . . . shame and arousal, mixing together . . . the growing tension, the power and cunning Jane has, the extra-special deliciousness of a woman dominating another woman like this . . . love what you've done here.

Do Stabler & Benson crash the party, save the girls and arrest the guys????

I think I'm being kind on this. The break from the 1st to 2nd part, no matter the reason, for me is a downer. I like a continuation of the story. Plus the telling of the party in chptr 2 could use some tightening up. These are just my opinions, hopefully they're seen as constructive. The story ends with no real conclusion. Would've been nice for the girl to be outed, to see Jake's reaction (and WHY didn't he want to go to the party?) and how Jake & his gf get along after.