All Comments on 'Atlantea Ch. 03'

I'm beginning to think this series is mislabeled. Three chapters in and no real fantasy angle I can see, this follows more closely with a bdsm genre. Still a fantastic story though.

im with the other guy here... fantasy doesn't mean YOUR fantasies, its more the genre of fantasy ranging from supernatural things occurring in our world to a Tolkienesque world of myhtical beings and magic. still a very good story

thanks for comments i promise it's actually sci-fi/fantasy, it should be more obvious soon, please bear with myself

".... "Just to be clear," Phoebe said at last, "we don't want you to be Dad. This going to be a strictly two mommies situation."

"That's fine!" I said, then added, "But can I be Uncle?"

"Yes, you can be Uncle Jay," Phoebe said with a smile. ..."

Oh how tremendously generous of them to graciously allow him to be an "uncle" to the child he didn't know he was creating, and who will share half of his genetic code. What an absolute Saint of a couple. I'll notify the freaking Vatican.

And I just went back and finished the chapter, and it actually gets fucking worse. Brilliant. Also, wtf isn't there a femdom tag on this... lovely story about a man who is content to act as a spineless, characterless sperm bank for lesbian couples, happily not giving a quantum of a damn about any of his children or what might happen to them in the future?

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Tags exist for a reason. Now I need some freaking brain bleach, thanks so much. This is probably the most impolite comment I've ever written here, but I never expected this sort of content in a fairly highly rated sf/f story, especially without any femdom tags. ("Bondage" is not freaking sufficient, tyvm) I feel like I stumbled over a rock, and fell into the fetish, bdsm, or LW categories.

3* because it's certainly not illegible, but I can't go higher. I'll give the rest of your work a miss, but good luck to you.

You do realize one story can be in multiple different sections? Like if there's zero sci-fi/fantasy elements, don't post it in sci-fi/fantasy until it becomes sci-fi/fantasy. I skimmed a couple chapters ahead and still no scifi/fantasy. Just a dude suckling on a woman's breast like an infant. Give your story proper tagging please, it's pretty rude what you're doing