All Comments on 'Attack of the Tickle Monsters'

Let Jackie but his brother in his place if you continue

Loser, why let him bully him

Through the story was well written it was obvious that sex would be involved. Pushing Jackie out after the game was wrong, mother and brother lying to Jackie was dead wrong making both just plain evil.

So he didn’t fuck her like his brother did.

I expected him to tell her that he knows that she was

lying about being fucked by his brother and who was best.

That would have been closure.

Honestly I didn't love the ending. One son fucked her and the favorite only got a tit fuck. How does that make sense?

Idk what you were going for here but this was such a poor ending. I'm not saying every story needs to have a happy ending but what was the point of treating the other brother like crap and why not just let them all sleep together.

You had a decent set up for a threesome but I feel like midway thru writing you wanted to push another chapter out and changed it last min or something .

3 stars for me

She’s a lying cunt! I hope her “favorite” finds out the truth and starts to treat her even more shitty.

Pretty good story with a great build up. Unlike the other couple posters, I like where and how it went, even though it’s screaming for another chapter. Hope you get a chance to get back to this, I can see a lot of potential in where this could go.

more don't leave the queen hanging