All Comments on 'AU Ch. 02'

waiting for a scene with the two of them talking to each other coz their chemistry is electric but I was disappointed. I love the dynamics of their relationship. I've been waiting a long time for this chapter and now I feel like Mark chickened out or didn't try. Maybe you are building it up to something big so I'll wait. I really do love what you could do with this story, just don't let it fall flat please.

I can't wait to see where you go with this - I love Maddox and Mark already, and they both deserve to be happy. I really hope that they can give a relationship a chance and manage to find some time to talk about it properly rather than deny their feelings. Exciting for the next chapter - please don't make us wait too long this time :P Thanks so much for sharing such a story with us ;)

I can't believe he did THAT!!!!!!!!!!!! Love the story so can't wait to read more. Update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

My heart just broke. I can't wait to read what happens next.

MORE PLEASE!

I love this story! Desperate to find out what happens in the next chapter. Please post again soon :)

I love your plot so far. It is just that you could eliminate many redundancies/too many explanations in the story, so that readers like us can read your story thoroughly without skimming, in order to get the point of each episode... Love your plot, though.

Plz tel me that this isn't a two part series...I'll die...

You'll have to clarify if you mean ended the story there. I assume not b/c it's not an ending at all. Hopefully we'll see another chapter soon.

I was trying to decide on if I should split up Chapter two and make Chapter three have it's climax in the middle but my editor and I thought this was the best place to stop. I promise there is more and I have alot of plot twists in mind. Thank You everyone for the feedback it helps a lot.

I agree please keep going this is a great story and I am looking forward to reading more

....and in this chapter most of your punctuation errors have been sorted out. But it needs to be carefully read through before you submit. At one point in the text (I can't tell you exactly where, because HTML does not allow proper page divisions) a line seems to have got missed out. I hope this doesn't sound too critical. Your characters and plot line so far are wonderful, and I'm looking forward to the next episode with great excitement. Tell your editors to be more vigilant!

More please!

I hope you all are not dissapointed with chapter 3... Like I mentioned here I was not sure if I should split this up or make 2-3 one chapter. My editor said break it up and I agreed. Chapter 3 is pending Chapter 4 is half done. I am taking a bit of a break here and there to work on finals at school.

Sorry thought it is way too slow. The most interesting character is the roommate.

i think this story is developing nicely and i would love to read more .