All Comments on 'Auctioning of Melissa'

If this is your first story, great job! hot idea, made gyrl juice muchly!

Really enjoyed your story, but I wish you would have put more effort into the story line. What was the bet about? How did it come about? What does her boyfriend do with the tape? Inquiring minds want to know. I hope you write some more chapters.

Thanks,

George/California

Such a great story, one of my favorites!