All Comments on 'Audition'

I still had Barry's sperm leaking out of me and Mark asked me what had got me so excited.

riiiight, stupid ending. mark KNEW she had gone to an audition he thought was for porn. he was WORRIED about her getting sucked into sex with someone else.

then suddenly that night gets a stupid attack? mark would not notice barry's sperm, or suspect her actions. not likely.

Hey this is good. I like the idea to maybe give old Mark a good dose of the clapp or maybe Herpes or even HIV. Serves him right for being a husband, The no good bastard. He deserves what he gets for making this fine lady a living.

Man I hope he dumps her ass and hasn't gotten AIDs or something as bad. She's the dumbest woman on this site , so far!

Excellent story - enjoyed the storyline. Will this continue?? Let's hope so

a lobotomy? He was suspicious before she went to the audition and then he just jumps into bed with her and doesn't notice that she has had sex recently?

She was working hard to be a professional, I just don't think it is as an actress though.

I wonder if Leo and Brad started this way though?

Dumb, you had the hubby worried about her doing sex films, and she comes home acting strange and horny and he does not think something has happened. whould have been a great short story if he would have checked her out and found out about the sex.... Could have been great interaction between the two of them. But now we have a cheating wife story. And are you going to fix this in part two or is hubby just a cuckold wimp like most of the stories here show husbands to be

It's time hubby starts making a movie of his own. Lets say a snuff movie. And if I may suggest a star player: he should check if his wife is available.

GARBAGE GARBAGE GARBAGE....WHAT A WASTE!!! I NORMALLY LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR STORIES...THIS ONE WAS TERRIBLE FROM THE GET GO. WHAT WERE YOU THINKING???

THIS! As I hold my head in dis-belief how any one could be

this asinine in a real world. I wasted my time reading this and all it did was make me angry for there is no man that could be this stupid or would even put up with this crap.

So story was total turn off due to author's ability to make these characters so stupid that the story just entered the twilight zone of total stupidity! You have talent as a writer but with almost all your stories of this cuckolding shit I would suggest some reality and a better subject! By the way how are the scores? Or do you even give a shit? with all the drivel you have doled out lately! It makes me wonder whether I should read any more of your stories or just vote "1" on everything that shows up with your name because of your past precedent that you continue to subject us to?

There's the little matter of her thinking, "Having now done one already, was there any reason not to do another?" Yes. It is possible that once can be passed off as being an accident, as just being caught up in the moment. Going back again is premeditated. Unless he really is a moron, he would have to figure out what is happening. (He would have to know at some point who she is working for, and it would take only a little more effort to find out what she is doing.)

One of the dumbest and worthless pieces of trash I've ever read on this site! Get real!

What a waste of your time and mine. This is another case where I wish the comments appeared BEFORE the story, rather than after it.

I think you started off with a good story idea, then carried it to its end pretty well. Thanks for taking the time to post it.

AAARON

Really, the reality just screams throughout this tail - HUH!

Simi-reality allows the possibility of entertainment depending on the authors skills. If it had been prefaced as a humorous piece perhaps - just perhaps it could have made some sense. Well written, but why 30 some year old braindead people?

It got me hard and I got off. I'm happy and glad u wrote it!

It was a great story - ignore the losers that whine about every story posted here.

Not much to think about,just a silly story.Not erotic,because it's not believable at all.

Unrealistic? Yes, that's what makes it so erotic. I didn't see a preface claiming it was a true story, and I wasn't expecting one. Instead, I got a first rate piece of naive young wife fiction. Thanks.

At 33 she is far too old for a sex movie.

Also, any normal person should realize they are never going to be an actor if not getting parts years before they are 33.

This woman had to look young to make a sex movie. She had to have the connections of a Marilyn Chamber or Ginger Lynn who have impressive records and connections. Danny, Johnny and Bruce got some free pussy and her Hubbie got sloppy seconds without him knowing.

I don't know what these other knuckleheads are expecting from a website that everybody can submit to. I happened to like the story.

Thanks,

B

Hot sex and seduction. Very good. I dunno know about the other reader comments. The advanced age of the woman and her stupidity and all probably would be better handled by making her younger but I knew this 34 year old hottie who would've been capable of falling for this. In reality, I know plenty of people who would be capable of this "naive" seduction and plenty who wouldn't. I don't think that matters. This story evokes a sexual and emotional reaction from me which makes it art. Also, it is left wanting for closure at the end so it is well set up for chapter 2. Write more.

the author must have a low opinion of women. Im a man not a woman.

An excellent erotic story that accomplishes its objective. If you want realism, try Theodore Dreiser.

Has auditioned with credentials for ages? Has an Agent? 33?

I think she would know by now through her agent and other girls she met the difference between legit studios and the call of skin and sex modeling and/or film studios.

Anyway,

I enjoyed the story, found it arousing, sexual and cute. Enjoyed your portrayal of her justifying each scene as she (supposedly) and innocently falls into it. A really entertaining and good fucking and well detailed story and not any BS to embellish.

BUT, why does there always have to be some poor slob husband or boyfriend who is getting screwed over and is about to have the love of his life changed or gone. How about, Gee, the family back home would never understand.

I Enjoyed!!!

the diseases she acquired that day. Isnt love grand?

The best laid plans of mice and men (and airhead actresses), etc.

I enjoyed every word of this story.

More stories, please.

At that point I stopped reading and rated this retard's story 1*. No one breaks into acting at that very late age. Even 23 would be getting too old. And, except for big name movie stars, no woman age 33 would be selected for partial nudity. That would be girls 16 to 22 if total nudity.

that are that dumb only care about themselves. If she can't tell her hubby about it, it's wrong. She knew it, and didn't care. Oh, well!

He couldn't help but notice her leakage, and didn't seem to care, either!

I'm not sure if I'd have enjoyed this any more or less if it were in the 3rd person instead of 1st person. As it was, Penny's ignorance and gullibility both were painful for me to read.

i read this story and i had to read it all , couldn't do anything else.i did love it and hope you are writing more soon ty good read

Loved the way the story moved but really made her out to be really stupid!

so much for no sex. now she is a stupid whore getting paid for sex. there

goes her acting career she wanted. her marriage is the next thing to go.

then the drugs will start up. a cheating whore the end.

She is old enough to know better, a sucker is born every minute .i wonder if she still be married in a year.

You're pretty good at writing unfinished tales. Sure sign of a writer of limited skills or imagination...or both.

How can almost nobody see that this is obviously tongue-in-cheek?

Try to look at it from the writer's point of view.

Ask yourself, "What's going on?"

This is comedy! Give the writer a little credit!

just another wife turned whore

And when Mark finds out she will be gone. Gone Gone. Write a part two where he finds out and divorces her.

I like it when the wife decides to just enjoy the adventure and let herself go.

He’s HIV positive and she’s homeless

Another piece of trash written to no appreciable purpose.

I can't imagine any of the top film actresses not having gone through that. Sad but it is a profession were the only way to the top is to fuck your way there. Not a brilliant story, but more feasible than most

The Reality of Acting

Many an aspiring actress' career ended on the casting couch. Penny performs in a menage - a - trois with little more than a vague promise of possible payment and future work. Did the Me - too movement change this? A penny for your thoughts?

Femdom agitprop is rampant in the video industry.

Disgusting. No redeeming value. Stupidity followed by lying. What a bitch. I agree with previous commentator Helen1899, probably a lot more common than we know.