All Comments on 'Audrey's Awakening Pt. 02'

Well written and very entertaining to me!! Thanks for sharing.

Love your writing style, and the way you are creating erotic tension without being trashy. Can't wait to see the next part...and the part after that!

What a beautiful vision you were able to describe of Audrey wearing such a sexy revealing dress. I was able to in vision her standing in front of you as if I was there. How you were able to keep your hands off of her is beyond. As another OldBullUS put it, the way you build sexual tension without being trashy is masterful. I can’t wait for ch.3.

More, please!

More Yummy Mommy, please!

He calls her Mom with nauseating frequency. And “my eyes nearly had a heart attack”. Really? Seriously? You can do better!

Best line was ".... it gives a sense of reality to the entire fantasy". What a beautiful line. It is going to be a really good starting point to reading other stories that I have not read. To the stories that I have already read, I would have to redefine them to that line. I have used "plausible" to try to define a part of a fantasy to make it fit my thoughts of what I am reading. I have a new phrase to help me now. Thank you!