All Comments on 'Audrey's Awakening Pt. 08'

by Jaymie_dee

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RRC2RRC2almost 3 years ago

The story is fantastic, the story telling is excellent.

THANKS

DenaliFXDenaliFXalmost 3 years ago
BETTER AND BETTER

Being in each other all the time is wonderful - the best way to play 'house' But the Nightingales need to pay the bills too. Joy is great, but there is more to this story. Payback across this generation is one of the themes of our future

AlwayysReadyy71AlwayysReadyy71almost 3 years ago

What a delicious read! I can’t wait for the next chapter.

old_riderold_rideralmost 3 years ago

OUTSTANDING!!! Keep writing. You are keeping the story line VERY interesting!

TrilloTrilloalmost 3 years ago

every episode builds on each character, and the plot changes just add some much more richness to the story... I love the action and I eagerly await the next installment. Cheers.

Blueman5410Blueman5410almost 3 years ago

Entertaining and wrapped up pretty well....with still so many options to continue the story! Sexy, satisfying and what appears to be a " happy ending" in so many ways...lol. Nicely done!

2cookies4u2cookies4uover 2 years ago

Absolutely fantastic story! I've been binge reading each part and it keeps getting better!

Where's Part 9?????

BTW - I hope Jessie screws over his estranged/soon-to-be EX wife Laura. She truly doesn't know how great she had it!

J_jimbosJ_jimbosover 2 years ago

I've enjoyed Audrey's Awakening immensely. I hope we're going to see Part 9 soon.

Lmcswain60Lmcswain60over 2 years ago

Wonderful story! Looking forward to #9!

LilkahunaLilkahunaover 1 year ago

Part 9?? Been over a year. Don't promise what you can't deliver.

Brian798Brian798over 1 year ago

read this 8 times , roll on part 9 please brilliant

Ronnie67Ronnie67over 1 year ago

Any chance of seeing part 9 any time soon- looking forward to reading it

DquiotiDquiotiabout 1 year ago

please tell me there is a Chapter #9 wrapping this all up. I'd love more but need the finale!! Great read, love the characters and the story line!! BZ

Gibbo68mustangGibbo68mustang9 months ago

Good story, still awaiting pt 9. Looking forward to Laura's reaction! Don't leave us hanging.

SlomoverSlomover8 months ago

Great story. I enjoyed it very much. Looking forward to reading pt.9

S_FoxS_Foxabout 2 months ago

Your words ……

The story continues in Audrey's Awakening Pt. 09

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