All Comments on 'Aunt Ava Knows Best'

Great story! So fucking arousing! I get really wet... I liked the hubby perspective, kind of different, good job

Love to see this story from the other side, Jennifer's suggest of things.

very strong build up to the climax

Very hot story,,,, do you see Jennifer leaving her hubby and getting married to aunt instead?

The idea of the husband seeing the lesbian seduction is a strong one.

But the English is very stilted and unnatural, full of faults which detract from the story. "Vaginal humors" indeed! It would be a good idea to get the text edited by a native English speaker.

Remarkable, but if I were you I would expand the final parts, the sex scenes are all too short and too fast. Also I would like the stories to continue even after, to tell the epilogue in detail, perhaps opening up to new adventures of our predators: Ava, Jasmine, Shahrazad. What would happen if Ava convinced Jennifer to let her seduce a friend of hers? or what if Chaty found herself supplanted by a new girl? maybe Jane? and why not tell about Shahrazad's adventure with the married woman you mentioned? and what happened to Molly after leaving the island?

very well done, I hope to read other stories of this tone, perhaps bringing back to life the protagonists of stories already written. Do you think you could marginally introduce, in an elegant way as you are able to do, a little more fetishist elements such as breastfeeding? strap-on? a light bondage? some foot worship? 

The theme of the story is quite interesting and it was a good decision to narrate the story from the husband's point of view. However, once again your sex scenes are non existent and there is a growing need for an editor. Your mistakes, although few, are really distracting. Please learn the difference between 'chest' and 'breasts'... Also, there was no description of Jennifer except 'beautiful' and 'small breasts', which makes us not really care or be able to visualise her seduction... And finally, stop planting spoilers, like 'that was the beginning of the end' or 'that's when everything started going wrong' etc.. Waiting for your next story...

Your stories are so well written and I do appreciate a lesbian seduction scene. The powerful women that you describe in your stories are so erotic. Please continue these types of stories,

Thanks for chapter 1. This is going to be a great story!

A good story and I like your main theme of a lesbian seducing a happily married woman, so have added this story to my favourites. But I agree with the comments made by others below. You could make your stories even better with some decent editing and basic spell checks.

Can you do a story on a Hollywood Bombshell falls in love with aspiring Indian actress, so Bombshell seduces her.

I wasn't a huge fan of the narrative being told from the husband's perspective. I feel like a lot of what I like from your stories is the internal monologue of the one being seduced which this format cuts out almost entirely. Still its an interesting attempt and it has the bones of your classic story so I still enjoyed it

Рассказ великолепен! Не отпускает до самой развязки .... я ваш поклонник

Loved all of your lesbian seduction/cheating stories up to this point- they get me all hot and bothered.

I only ask you to keep up the good work.

While there are several points of improvement like occasional spelling and grammar mistakes, it pretty much always ends up being fine and overlookable, still better than some fanfics anyway. What bothered me a bit was the her wife parts while writing from the guys perspective, i mean honestly i dont mind, but the guy didnt say a word about being like gender-fluid or anything..

Anyways great work, and please wite more.

I don't want to be an annoying scrounger but 3 or 4 stories a year are few. Here we are hungry for reading

1* still a cuck story.

amazing story, I hope to meet the aunt again!

intriguing, something more about Aunt Ava and Uncle Paul's daughter? I ideally see large rooms with the trophies won by this woman on the walls.

Very Hot!

Waiting for chapter 2

please continue! write a series from this story.

it's absolutely necessary to deepen the character of Aunt Ava

Lazy depiction of an interesting theme. It painfully obvious that the writer couldn't come up with proper dialogue, the seduction happened magically with conversations unheard, with texts we couldn't read, just 3rd party descriptions of an incident. Poor. 2*

I read your stories in one day and was hoping for new adventures, but after all these months I guess I'm going to be disappointed.

I'm crazy about those hints of your protagonists' past adventures. I find them extremely intriguing

Fuck!!! I don't know who is your most seductive woman. I would have said Jasime or Sherazade or Rhonda but now that I've read about Aunt Ava...

erotic fantastic as always

Would be delightful to see the story from Jennifer's perspective too

Holy shit! Bro why don't you tell us the story of Aunt Ava and Uncle Paul's daughter?! you have what it takes to become Literotica's greatest lesbian storyteller!

That ending was sudden and left unfinished

To those saying the writer could be really good that this story was good let me explain why the story wasn't good nor can the writer be that good it's 1 thing really a story can't be good nor can the writer be that good if it's left unfinished this was left unfinished making the story no good and the writer gets known for writing unfinished stories so he won't ever be that good

damn! once I find a great writer he never writes again!

lol agree with the last comment or takes forever for new story!

I hope in next part his mom shows up with his ex girlfriend who broke up with him after meeting his mom .. and now he finds out why .. because she married his mom.. then his sister shows up and they all fuck wife and ex gf while he watches and can’t do anything 😉

If she truly loved her husband that would have never happened if she was truly straight she wouldn't have been seduced its pretty simple the wife was a slut and wanted to betray her husband which is why she lied to him point blank he should fly home kick the slut to the curb and ruin her life 100 percent completely and ruin the other girls life completely make them both wish they were dead if I was the husband that's what I would do if I could even stay calm if I can't stay calm I would just kill the slut and her lover without even blinking an eye nor would I lose sleep over it cause She's nothing but a cheating slut who don't deserve to live nor does anyone who would openly seduce a married person so they don't deserve to live either

In your next story about cheating slut make sure the husband kills the slut and her lovers in the most painful way you can think of you do that then you will finally have a proper ending to a loving wife story that's about a cheating slut and not a loving wife