All Comments on 'Aunt Brenda'

What whore does not use a rubber.

This is good needs minor editing.... Needs a sequel

Excellent story and loved the surprise in mid story. Would have given you 6*, but the POV changes were too quick to-n-fro even with the headers. Detracted from, as emphatically as I can get, an excellent plot and build.

Good story, I would love to see more.

Pov changes not good. Good otherwise. Sexy idea

I enjoyed the story very much. Grammar could use some refinement. The comments are constructive criticism, please heed.

I hope you do write a sequel.

This is the stuff I come here to read. Hot af...