by Amisit__Scintilla
I don't know what to think about this series. There are series/stories I like from beginning to end; there are series that I begin liking but I end up disliking because along the way something happens that ruins the series for me. Right now, I don't know what group this series is gonna belong to. It will depend on the role the dad is gonna play. Right now, I don't like that it seems that the mother is cheating on him. And if she is not cheating on him because they have an open relationship, I wouldn't like that either because sharing/swapping/sharing are major turn-offs for me. I'd dislike that the father and son shared the mother and/or the aunt.
I'd like to be wrong but I'm afraid that I'm gonna end up disliking the story.
Surprised by part 3 going from 1st person to 3rd person then back to 1st person in part 4.
Great story.
Keep the story going.
Disregard the previous comment as they cannot even write a story to submit.
UGH - well written but the yellow shower part was distracting and unnecessary. 3*