All Comments on 'Aunt Jo'

This whole story was confusing and it feels like a mashup of stories put down in a rush.

Please go back and edit this. You had a good story idea but it was hard to read when your mind is trying to make it work and or correcting it while reading it.

Love to see how summer develops

Looking for an old story of similar topic but much more developed. Boy goes to live with aunt and she has a stable of workers in the house and land that are also transgender. Any help, please