by SexWriter1000
Good story line. Keep up the great writing and keep us all reading.
Really like the series. Kinda like that you didn't go some improbable seduction route where the parent or kid slowly gives in. They know they shouldn't be fucking and do it anyway.
I have given you a 5 score, but that is only for the story line, but if there was a score count for spelling etc etc you would be getting a minus score if there was a minus score, as I'm afraid your spelling is crap, it's even worse than mine as when i'm writing a letter or whatever I have to proof read it more that twice with a dictionary in hand, so please get some kind of help somewhere to help you, other than that I've no other problems.
Is chapter 5 not finished? Your last update of 4/27 indicated it was just about ready. Enjoying the story.