by yakboy69
Enticing explanation of dad and Aunt Megan. Now so many possibilities have entered the fold.
This was an awesome story but if u could continue it it would be amazing and maybe have Nate go back and do anal with megan
You did that very smoothly, I was hoping for more but that was very well done especially since he sees something with Naomi in the future. I was hoping he was staying with Megan as a happily ever after type of ending, I hope you explain the issues with his mother.
Erotica or not this is just about the best I've ever read. Sex , yes. A story line , yes. Most stories are built to hold more sex , but yours was a story with sex. Just saying this wasnt just about sex and that is what made this a good read. Bravo.
This would be one of the best series I have read.
I hope it will continue in some form
I always prefer the “dance” of family members coming to grips with their attraction as it seems more realistic than leaping in the sack. But also it was so good to see Nate struggle with his self-awareness and confidence as a lover. In some respects that seems like a lifelong struggle. I also liked that Megan was a free spirit and one can’t help wondering if there’s “hereditary” aspects of that given Nate’s father and how he addressed his sister. Maybe the one thing that was so odd was how did Nate’s parents hook up or why? Still a HOT series that leaves me missing the sweet affection of a 30-something woman! :)
Makes me wonder!?!
I noticed that your multi-chapter stories come out really close together like you write it all then submit each chapter a few days apart. If that's the case then this is the end of the story because you've already written other's. This makes me wonder... did you not have an ending planned past this? what happens when Nate talks with his mother? What happens with Naomi? and many other questions. while that was a good way to end the chapter I personally think it sucks for the end of the story.
yakboy69:- I enjoyed your story very much, thanks.
And just a note here to Fuzzy_Kbear, that yakboy69 will probably agree with: -
Literotica's publishing process can have significant delays between submission and publication, as you will probably have noted with your (currently) two published works. If you read the Lit. FACs, they already have a response for the likes of "Why has my work taken so long to be published?".
So, even if you submit your (say) six separate chapters of a work on the same day, they are likely to actually be published up to five or six days apart (but often less).
That has certainly happened to my multi-chapter submissions.
Story was excellent! I really enjoyed reading it. But to echo some of my fellow readers, this needs a final chapter, too much is laying open. I hope you do that soon.
Very cool story, the characters were cleverly detailed and the story filled with "joie de vive" 😎
I WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE PART8 AN 9 DO NATE GO BACK TO MEGAN
Plus I THINK NATE AS FALLING IN LOVE WITH MEGAN ?
That was a beautiful series. While I would love to see a continuation of the story including Naomi and Megan, the story ended just right. It was complete and lovely.