by black saphire
Great story line! But...GET AN EDITOR!!!
Your use of the word ‘had’ in almost every sentence is both wrong and annoying! Ugh!
Hot but inconsistent
In the previous chapter Tyler told Peg that Judith was the first girl he had anal sex with, yet in this chapter you said Aunt Peg’s ass was the first that he had fucked. This spoiled the retelling of the story - you never forget who’s ass was your first!!!
I'd have been glad to get into Peg's ass even if an legion of guys beat me to it! I want to wear Peg's panties while I'm fucking her, and while she fucks me.
A bit of pee play is in order about now too. He's always mentioning the smell/taste of pee while he's munching her panties.