All Comments on 'Aunt Phyllis Ch. 01'

I love my aunt. Mommy has no problem with us. Auntie Loretta was my first and she being just seven years older than me we have been together ever since. We have three children. Mommy caught us on the couch and just said,' use your bedroom, don't get caught, and air this damned place out(it reeked of sex)'. Mommy was my cousin's first, rather later, and they still are together though no offspring blesses their union. Your character here waited too many years and your first few paragraphs are unclear on what is happening.

the story was starting out good but there needs to be a little more build up to the sex

Add 70 year old mother to the sex with her 49 year old son and 51 year old sister

Thanks for your comments....

1. The character waited too long simply because the time was never right, or the occasion wasn't there....

2. A monkey... Lolol... Made my day. Thanks just the same. :-)

why waqs he in school before her if she is 2 years older?when did they get in to the apartment?they were outside of the door then they put the bags down and go at it like a whore and john.